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[[Category:Rules]]'''Current Wording'''
[[Category:Rules]]'''Current Wording'''


''Effects:'' From the Adept’s fingertips erupts a column of rotting blood, pus, maggots and shards of bone which travel to the extent of the spell’s range, and is 5 feet wide. The Adept may increase the width by 1 foot per Rank. All entities occupying hexes through which the stream passes must resist or suffer [D - 2] (+ 1 / Rank) damage. Entities who are damaged by this spell have their Base Chance of Infection increased by 20 (+ 4 / Rank). The putrid matter remains for about a minute after the spell is cast.
''Effects:'' From the Adept's fingertips erupts a column of rotting blood, pus, maggots and shards of bone which travel to the extent of the spell's range, and is 5 feet wide. The Adept may increase the width by 1 foot per Rank. All entities occupying hexes through which the stream passes must resist or suffer [D - 2] (+ 1 / Rank) damage. Entities who are damaged by this spell have their Base Chance of Infection increased by 20 (+ 4 / Rank). The putrid matter remains for about a minute after the spell is cast.


'''Proposed Wording:'''
'''Proposed Wording:'''


''Effects:'' From the Adept’s fingertips erupts a column of rotting blood, lacerating bone shards, maggots, and corrosive pus, which travels to the extent of the spell’s range, and is 5 feet wide. The Adept may increase the width by 1 foot per Rank. All entities occupying hexes through which the stream passes must resist or suffer [D - 2] (+ 1 / Rank) damage. Living entities who are damaged by this spell have their Base Chance of Infection increased by 20 (+ 4 / Rank). The putrid matter remains for about a minute after the spell is cast.
''Effects:'' From the Adept's fingertips erupts a column of rotting blood, lacerating bone shards, maggots, and corrosive pus, which travels to the extent of the spell's range, and is 5 feet wide. The Adept may increase the width by 1 foot per Rank. All entities occupying hexes through which the stream passes must resist or suffer [D - 2] (+ 1 / Rank) damage. Living entities who are damaged by this spell have their Base Chance of Infection increased by 20 (+ 4 / Rank). The putrid matter remains for about a minute after the spell is cast.

Latest revision as of 18:10, 8 February 2024

Current Wording

Effects: From the Adept's fingertips erupts a column of rotting blood, pus, maggots and shards of bone which travel to the extent of the spell's range, and is 5 feet wide. The Adept may increase the width by 1 foot per Rank. All entities occupying hexes through which the stream passes must resist or suffer [D - 2] (+ 1 / Rank) damage. Entities who are damaged by this spell have their Base Chance of Infection increased by 20 (+ 4 / Rank). The putrid matter remains for about a minute after the spell is cast.

Proposed Wording:

Effects: From the Adept's fingertips erupts a column of rotting blood, lacerating bone shards, maggots, and corrosive pus, which travels to the extent of the spell's range, and is 5 feet wide. The Adept may increase the width by 1 foot per Rank. All entities occupying hexes through which the stream passes must resist or suffer [D - 2] (+ 1 / Rank) damage. Living entities who are damaged by this spell have their Base Chance of Infection increased by 20 (+ 4 / Rank). The putrid matter remains for about a minute after the spell is cast.